Case analysis rubric 案例分析评分标准

Criteria 标准

Excellent 非常好

Good/Very Good 好/非常好

Satisfactory 满意

Not Shown/Unsatisfactory 未显示/不满意

Marks 标志着

Exposition 博览会

  • Material Facts 重要事实
  • Identification of Legal Issue
    法律问题的识别
  • Summary of Reasoning 推理摘要
  • Statement of Ratio 比率表

6 to > 5 marks
6 至 > 5 分

 

• Account of facts succinct, includes all relevant facts, omits irrelevant information
• 简明扼要地叙述事实,包括所有相关事实,省略不相关的信息

• Legal issues identified and stated precisely
• 准确识别和陈述法律问题

• Concise and accurate explanation of the court’s reasoning and authorities that are central to its reasoning. Where appropriate will refer to the form of reasoning in which the court engages, e.g. distinguishing, analogy etc.
• 简明扼要地解释法院的推理和权威,这是法院推理的核心。在适当的情况下,将提及法院采用的推理形式,例如区分、类推等。

• Succinct, clear, and accurate statement of ratio.
• 简洁、清晰、准确的比例陈述。

5 to > 3 marks
5 至 > 3 分

 

• Includes all material facts but might also include some irrelevant information.
• 包括所有重要事实,但也可能包括一些不相关的信息。

• Legal issues identified and stated clearly.
• 明确指出并说明法律问题。

• Provides an accurate and succinct account of the court’s reasoning but omits some significant detail, or fails to explain the significance of every authority referred to in the summary of reasoning.
• 准确和简洁地说明法院的推理,但省略了一些重要的细节,或者没有解释推理摘要中提到的每个权威的重要性。

• narrative explanation of the court’s reasoning but might omit some relevant detail
• 对法院推理的叙述性解释,但可能遗漏一些相关细节

• Clear statement of ratio(s)
• 清晰的比率声明

3 to > 1 marks
3 至 > 1 分

 

• Provides an account of the facts that includes most of the material facts but also includes a significant amount of irrelevant information.
• 提供对事实的叙述,包括大部分重要事实,但也包括大量不相关的信息。

• Legal issue identified but lacks precision.
• 已发现法律问题,但缺乏准确性。

• Provides a narrative explanation of the court’s
• 提供法院的叙述性解释

reasoning. But this might be brief and will often fail to adequately explain the significance of the authorities referred to by the court in its reasoning.
推理。但是,这可能很简短,而且往往无法充分解释法院在其推理中提到的当局的重要性。

• Provides a statement of the ratio(s), but it is lacks precision and/or clarity
• 提供比率的声明,但缺乏准确性和/或清晰度

1 to > 0 marks
1 至 > 0 分

 

• Account of facts very brief and leaves out important information.
• 对事实的叙述非常简短,遗漏了重要信息。

• Legal issue not identified or incorrectly identified.
• 未识别或错误识别的法律问题。

• Summary of reasoning brief and disjointed. Some of the cases, legislation, reports etc referred to by the court might be mentioned but significance not explained
• 推理摘要简短且不连贯。法院提及的一些案例、立法、报告等可能会被提及,但其重要性并未得到解释

• Ratio(s) not stated • 比率未说明

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Critical Analysis 批判性分析

5 to > 4 marks
5 至 > 4 分

• Demonstrates sophisticated understanding of the legal and/or social/moral/political implications of the court’s decision.
• 表现出对法院判决的法律和/或社会/道德/政治影响的深刻理解。

• Provides thorough analysis of one or more of these issues.
• 对其中一个或多个问题进行全面分析。

4 to > 3 marks
4 至 > 3 分

• Provides critical analysis of the social and/or legal implications of the court’s decision, but these might be the more obvious implications.
• 对法院判决的社会和/或法律影响进行批判性分析,但这些可能是更明显的影响。

• The analysis demonstrates a sound understanding of the issue(s) but the analysis lacks sophistication and nuance
• 分析表明对问题有充分的理解,但分析缺乏复杂性和细微差别

3 to > 1 marks
3 至 > 1 分

• Attempts to evaluate the court’s decision in terms of its social or legal implications.
• 试图从社会或法律影响的角度评估法院的裁决。

• Demonstrates some insight but the analysis is somewhat superficial, and ideas are underdeveloped.
• 展示了一些洞察力,但分析有些肤浅,想法不充分。

1 to > 0 mark
1 至 > 0 标记

• Offers no critical analysis or makes a brief reference (one or two sentences) to possible social or legal implications/consequences of the court’s decision (one or two sentences) without further elaboration.
• 没有提供批判性分析,也没有简要提及(一两句话)法院裁决可能产生的社会或法律影响/后果(一两句话),而没有进一步详细说明。

• Demonstrates little or no understanding/awareness of the implications of the decision.
• 表现出对决定的影响很少或根本没有理解/认识。

5

Legal Writing Range 法律写作范围

 

5 to > 4 marks
5 至 > 4 分

• Has a logical and clear structure. Good use of headings.
• 具有逻辑清晰的结构。善用标题。

• Correct use of grammar throughout.
• 在整个过程中正确使用语法。

• Does not contain long and complex sentences. Uses simple language. Good use of paragraphs to indicate next step in analysis or exposition.
• 不包含冗长而复杂的句子。使用简单的语言。善于使用段落来指示分析或阐述的下一步。

• Ideas, propositions, and authorities always accompanied by adequate explanation and contextual information
• 想法、命题和权威总是伴随着充分的解释和背景信息

4 to > 3 marks
4 至 > 3 分

• Has a logical and clear structure. Good use of headings.
• 具有逻辑清晰的结构。善用标题。

• Use of grammar generally good, but there might be a few minor errors.
• 语法的使用总体上不错,但可能会有一些小错误。

• Some sentences might be complex and deal with more than one point. Some paragraphs might be length and deal with numerous issues.
• 有些句子可能很复杂,涉及多个问题。有些段落可能很长,涉及许多问题。

• Ideas, propositions, and authorities will generally be accompanied by adequate explanation and contextual information. But lack of elaboration results in occasional ambiguity
• 想法、命题和权威通常会附有充分的解释和背景信息。但是,缺乏详细说明会导致偶尔的含糊不清

3 to > 1 marks
3 至 > 1 分

• Has a discernible structure indicated by headings but is somewhat disorganised/does not follow logical order. Headings that are used might be confusing and/or uninformative; the headings may not reflect the content (eg, a heading of analysis may only contain more descriptive material)
• 具有由标题指示的可辨别结构,但有些杂乱无章/不遵循逻辑顺序。使用的标题可能会令人困惑和/或没有信息;标题可能无法反映内容(例如,分析标题可能仅包含更具描述性的材料)

• The essay is generally intelligible but there are parts in which poor use of language results in ambiguity or otherwise makes it difficult to understand the idea or point that is being conveyed;
• 文章通常是可以理解的,但有些部分语言使用不当会导致歧义,或者以其他方式使理解所传达的想法或观点变得困难;

• Ideas, propositions, and authorities will often not be accompanied by adequate explanation and contextual information
• 想法、命题和权威往往不会伴随着充分的解释和背景信息

1 to > 0 marks
1 至 > 0 分

• Has no discernible structure.
• 没有明显的结构。

• The text includes a significant number of sentences that are incomplete and/or contain errors that make them difficult to understand.
• 文本包含大量不完整的句子和/或包含使其难以理解的错误。

• Legal propositions - other than those that are common knowledge – not supported by relevant authority; cases referred to not accompanied by any explanation of their significance. Ideas and propositions introduced but explained – will take the form of ‘bare assertions’
• 法律主张 - 除了那些是常识的主张 - 没有得到有关当局的支持;所提及的案件未附上对其重要性的任何解释。提出但解释的想法和命题——将采取“赤裸裸的断言”的形式

5

Referencing and Citation 参考文献和引用

4 to > 3 marks
4 至 > 3 分

• Citations and footnotes provided for all cases, legislation, reports, articles etc referred to in both the text and footnotes. Citations and referencing practice always conform to AGLC
• 为正文和脚注中提及的所有案例、立法、报告、文章等提供引文和脚注。引用和引用实践始终符合 AGLC

• Pinpoint references provided in support of all aspects of analysis of the judgment
• 为支持判决分析的所有方面而提供的精确参考资料

• Includes accurate and comprehensive bibliography.
• 包括准确和全面的参考书目。

3 to > 1 marks
3 至 > 1 分

• Citations and footnotes will be provided for most cases, legislation, reports, articles etc referred to both in the text of the case analysis or footnotes. Citations and referencing practice conform to AGLC but not consistently.
• 对于案例分析文本或脚注中提及的大多数案例、立法、报告、文章等,都将提供引文和脚注。引用和引用实践符合 AGLC,但不一致。

• Pinpoint references accompany most of the analysis of the judgment
• 精确的引用伴随着对判决的大部分分析

• Includes largely accurate bibliography.
• 包括基本准确的参考书目。

1 to > 0 marks
1 至 > 0 分

• Citations and footnotes will be provided for some but not all cases, legislation, reports, articles etc referred to both in the text of the case analysis or footnotes. Citations and referencing practice does not conform to AGLC.
• 对于案例分析文本或脚注中提到的一些但不是全部的案例、立法、报告、文章等,将提供引文和脚注。引用和引用实践不符合 AGLC。

• Some pinpoint references supporting analysis of the judgment.
• 一些精确的参考资料支持对判决的分析。

• Includes bibliography, but has several flaws in that it does not accord with many AGLC criteria and/or some material referred to in the case analysis missing.
• 包括参考书目,但存在一些缺陷,因为它不符合许多 AGLC 标准和/或案例分析中提到的一些材料缺失。

0 marks 0 分

• Text will only contain case names, titles of Acts, reports, and legislation for which full citations are not provided in footnotes.
• 案文将仅包含案例名称、法案、报告和立法的标题,而脚注中未提供完整引用。

• Some passages might will be reproduced verbatim from other sources without required attribution.
• 有些段落可能会逐字转载自其他来源,而不需要注明出处。

• Discussion of aspects of the case, e.g. ratio and/or court’s reasoning not accompanied by pinpoint references to relevant part of judgment.
• 对案件各个方面的讨论,例如比率和/或法院的推理,而没有附带对判决相关部分的精确引用。

• No bibliography • 无参考书目

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